Key things I’m looking for:
- Intro:
- Opening few sentences to make the reader care about the topic/issue.
- Clear thesis statement: I should be able to know exactly what position your going to try to convince me of.
- Clear road map: I should be able to know exactly what steps you’re going to take to convince me of your thesis.
- Body:
- Clear explanations supported by direct quotes.
- Topic sentences: I should be able to read the first sentence of each paragraph and know what the paragraph will be about/try to convince me of.
- Appropriate use of examples to either clarify or persuade.
- Persuade your reader! Never assume your reader already holds your view. It’s your job to bring them into the light step by step.
- Opinions are not arguments. Support your assertions with evidence and reasons. Your paper should be littered with the word ‘because’.
- USE SECTION HEADINGS! Otherwise, use whatever style you like (APA, MLA, etc…)
- 1 idea=1 paragraph. Don’t be afraid of short paragraphs.
- For each argumentative point, explain to the reader how/why it’s relevant to your thesis. Don’t assume your reader can see the connection.
- Footnotes are a good way to address or acknowledge a side issue without interrupting the flow of your paper.
- Writing:
- Clear and easy to follow.
- Ideas obviously flow from one to the next. There is a rational structure to your ideas.
- Short. Declarative. Sentences.
- Read each paragraph out loud after you’ve completed it. If there are awkward places, rewrite!
- 1 idea=1 paragraph. Don’t be afraid of short paragraphs.
- Avoid the passive voice unless there’s no way around it.
- Talk to me. Have a conversation with your reader. No need to get all fancy if that’s not how you talk.
